In the voice of clowns
everything dissolves
even 'you' and 'I'
It takes us back
memories we often forget
'Childhood'
Author notes
prompt: When the clown gets serious, everybody listens
20 words
A contest entry
- Quickie Prompt by lowercase prelude.
600 points, ended June 20, 2008, 10 entries
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No critique here.
This just points straight and directly to simple innocence.
Nicely done Ruby!
Sol
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LOVELY!!!!!!
Yes, you are so right, laughter is the very best medicine for what it wrong with us.
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So true..and also it reminds me of myself..somewhere sometimes and somehow we all are living the life of clowns..lol..and behaving in the same manner..quite touching verse ..a agreat work indeed...
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Are you living the life of clowns?lol
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good take on the prompt, however, I think it would sound better if "clown" was plural
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yes you right..I will add an 'S'..thank you for your comment
Ruby
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