The rain that pitters and patters,
onto my window Paine,
not just any kind of rain,
It's the Life giving rain.
The life giving rain lands softly on trees,
the flowers, and even sinks down into the undergrowth.
And before every on knows it...
the rain begins to do it's magic.
Immediately all things dieing of dehydration,
begin to show their pretty colors.
And all also begin to stand straight up.
Right away the bad feelings,
Caused by all the sickness, and deaths,
are washed away completely by the flowing water.
Now the life giving rain is done it's work
and it can now rest,
until it's needed somewhere else;
it has done it's best.
And so the next time you here or see the rain,
Pittering and pattering,on your window Paine,
Call it softly by it's real name,
The life giving rain.
A contest entry
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Comments
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Emotions present in this piece are really beautiful..there are however quite a few spelling errors...
Thank you for entering my contest!
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