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Unforgotten




She dances upon the currents of my dreams;
leaving footprints of love etched into my heart,
memories embraced, never forgotten.

Time smiles on my beloved,

her flower blooming,

scented with the essence of

beauty, and truth everlasting.

 

I sing, my soul filled with happiness,
wading in pools of yesterdays joy...

 

living for love to greet me again - tomorrow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Pamela A Lamppa Invite

Prompt:
"The poet's eye, in a fine frenzy rolling,
Doth glance from heaven to earth, from earth to heaven;
And, as imagination bodies forth
The forms of things unknown, the poet's pen
Turns them to shapes, and gives to airy nothing
A local habitation and a name."
"A Midsummer Night's Dream" (5.1.7-12), Theseus to his companions

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    August 29

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    Overwhelming!

    This is so beautiful! I love the way you start this poem out:

    She dances upon the currents of my dreams;
    leaving footprints of love etched into my heart,
    memories embraced, never forgotten.

    This is so expressive & vivid! Then you detail how the memory of this love grows & lifts you to embrace love in the future! Past, present, future all in a romantic & sensitive way that's not gushing, but pure & emotive! Lovely work! Thanks for this. It's so comforting to know that men can express deep emotion & in such an artistically sensitive way! All the best in the contest!


  • Winklings gold member
    July 31

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    "yesterday's joy..."
    leaves footprints ~ for me, gives greater immediacy.
    This poem is delightful. It is romantic but sincere.
    You look backwards, at the present and forwards: "wading in pools of yesterday's joy..."; "Time smiles on my beloved, her flower blooming,"; "living for love to greet me again - tomorrow".
    Beautiful imagery, gently woven into a poem of love.
    Thank you poet. I am glad Pamela invited you.
    Lyndon of the Winklings.


  • Image and Visions silver member
    June 30

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    well done

    I can really feel the emotion of this piece as if it speak to the images imprinted in my own mind. In someways it feels like the poetry old, just with a contempory flare. nicely Done Image and Visions

  • R S Adams Jr silver member
    June 22

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    wonderful vocabulary...

    This poem is tranquillity as the romance is carried in your wonderful vocabulary. It is ful of emotion and paints a peaceful, loving picture.


  • Desire gold member
    June 20

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    Oy!!

    Oh My this is a Beauty and I was about to begin work on my piece for this contest
    The quote so grabbed~ and so does Your Voice
    Magnificent!!
    Picture to feed the masses my Friend

    Love this
    Beautiful border to compliment~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 20

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    This is very beautiful and I love the background that you have used goodluck in the contest love you loads

  • Bob Fox
    June 20
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    Nice

    Words of love with a delicious tone and the magic pen strikes out a beauty


  • delightfulmess gold member
    June 20

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    Oh my my....
    This is stunning!!!! I am blown away. I was just working on mine for this contest as well.
    (crumples my paper~ throws away lol)... I think this is excellent such a smooth feel to it.

    Oh and that first line is Sensational!!!!
    Great opening hook


    Love
    Delila

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