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Grim Faces



Dead air deafens
extinguishing laughter
through the masses


~lighthearted joy
  of childhood giggles
  now forges in grim-visage.

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When the clown gets serious, everybody listens

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  • acalmingvoice
    June 20, 2008

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    Hummm.....

    I like this one because it makes me think.....I'm not real sure I "got it" but hey thats what poetry is all about....everyone can draw what they will....the importen part is you won the silver,...concrats to you !!!......best wishes and love.....me.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 20, 2008
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    oh, i love the imagery you've displayed here. it just lifts on the page. well done with this.