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rainclouds

i want to find
who i was

before;


but your silence
breaks
to lightning.







shattered.

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15 words.

Prompt: "Some people walk in the rain. Some just get wet."

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 20, 2008
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    simplistic, yet well expressed and profoundly detailed... x


  • najji
    June 20, 2008

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    love.

    'i want to find
    who i was

    before;'

    i feel like this everyday.
    i suppose it gets in the way of everything.