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Brooms

Paranoia's prophecy jester

utters satirical doom,

audience

tires of feigned gloom.

 

Deafness dies

when his frowning eyes

materializes disaster's broom.

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Your prompt: When the clown gets serious, everybody listens

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  • Amarige
    June 20, 2008
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    Lovely take on the prompt my friend..best of luck
    Ruby


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 20, 2008
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    wonderful take on the prompt. so very well penned. i love your word usage. this was marvelous.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 20, 2008

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    Now this is serious and an excellent write for the prompt...scary thought when the clown is frowning...nice flow and meter with excellent vocabulary...nicely done!
    Best...
    mystic