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Be A Man

Be a man I don't want to feel like I am dating a little boy who plays with his GIJO'S I want a man I want a handsome man who could act like a man who is so romantic who has a good personalities
a man, be a man because you look handsome and you look a fun guy baby don't you want to watch rated R movies?
Don't you want to dance how you want?
To a bar?
So be a man oh please be a man
I am trying to be bossy I am just want to date a real
man.
Hello! Who r u?
Be a man
you make feel like a pretty woman.
  You make feel like a pretty woman.
I can't help it but you make me to dance you make me want to get dirrty.
Be a man, be a man
that's what I just need a wonderful man if you don't want to be a man I don't care so won't you let me love you anyways or won't you just leave me that's okay because my mom said I don't need you so won't you not feel bad on be a man anyways  
you lost my trust on you being a man.
I don't  want to let you back in my life because from you I'll
be on moving on because you left me that's okay because I can find
a guy who is a well enough to be a man so I would give you hugs &
Kisses good-bye because I am movin' to a new journey so please don't call if you do their  is an answering machine picking up for me because I am not going to answer so won't you be a man.

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Written January 1st, 2004

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  • d635p
    January 1, 2004
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    Be a man I don't want to feel like I am dating a little boy

    good stuff im sure
    a lot of ladies feel this way
    but not mineeeee cuz im a man

    -dannnnnnn