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HW...Friend With The Golden Heart

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He has the look of kindness

and understanding in his eyes

The sence of humor he possess

comes as no surprise

 

This friend has a loving soul

and a protective nature he extends

His shoulder is always available

should you be a victim of offends

 

This nurthuring loving friend

is both emotional and intutitive

Sensitive of his surroundings

right from the start

 

He has fond memories of

family and friends of days gone by

and stores them within the confines

of his golden heart

 

In his subconscious mind

he dreams of the sea

surging and ebbing with the ocean tide

Feelings are expressed

as the waters seem to calm

The sensitiveness and tenderness

on the waves seem to ride

 

This friends heart is made of pure gold

filled with love and passion

not to be sold

Melting free and flowing

to all who pass his way

His strong sense of character

he shows every day

 

 

 

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  • just mercedes gold member
    June 22, 2008

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    This is a lovely accolade to a friend. Your words flow freely with your feelings, and I get an image of a wise and kindly person. You are fortunate to have such a person in your life.


  • arafura gold member
    June 20, 2008

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    Lovely poem my friend! Your friend will be thrilled to have someone value them so highly. Good luck in the contest!


  • Sagerider
    June 20, 2008
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    Great write.

    It sounds like a really good person.


  • spilt ink
    June 20, 2008

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    That was GREAT! But slightly depressing since I'm entered in the same contest. LOL. Keep on writing the good stuff. S.I.