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Hermie and Angel (Acrostic)

H ermie is so sweet
E ven holding him is a treat
R emember, he is shy
M eaning, he has sleepy eyes
I know he likes the shady "Hermy Hut"
E ven though in his shell he's shut

A fter all, he is a hermit crab
N ot knowing if he's in a chemistry lab
D ozing off sometimes when he is awake

A nd last but not least,
N ot another hermie hun!
G oing to show that he's a "beast"
E ven though he's the littlest one!
L ittle does he know he's so cute indeed.

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  • VirginiaDarling
    August 22, 2008
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    Aww that is sweet. Very nice poem. It was a pleasure to read. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!


  • Animals
    June 21, 2008

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    thats Cute! Hey I'm 11 as well! I'm the author of "Happiness". Please check it out. I also wrote "My Odd Cat Harry". Do you want to be friends on all poetry?


  • Naznomarn
    June 20, 2008

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    Hehe cute! Only thing I'd change is Dosing to Dozing!
    Very nicely done!

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