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waking up

softly
eyes opening
into morning focus
encircled in warmth
comfortable blankets
and your smile
your skin
your eyes
tell me
a story
of love

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  • JustFallingApart
    July 4, 2008
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    a nice write, short and sweet, thanks for entering

  • DragonFlyer
    June 24, 2008

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    I like it very much.
    I like it when you talk about my brother.
    I hope I can see you again.


  • HeavensDaughter
    June 20, 2008
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    This made me smile. I like it! It is interesting how simple things can tell a great story.