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You and I

I look around and see
Something next to me
It's you it always was
But now your leaving cause
You thought I didn't see
You standing next to me
But I want you to stay
In every single way
So now that you won't leave
Are you going to ask me
Ask me out tonight
Ask me it's alright
And we will live forever
You and me together
You and I
And we'll never say goodbye

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  • Shya
    June 20, 2008

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    Good rhyming (though a little uneven in some parts) and it sounds like it could be sung. A good write. Thanks for entering!