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Oh, How Peculiar

 

Images of nightmares
on the screens of my reality
Bringing forth more fear that I don't need
Seeing things I wish I never had

Oh, how peculiar

It never seems to go away
The screams that never fade away
When the world and it's accolades choose to haunt me
Transforming me from man to monster, scarred and scorned

Oh, how peculiar

 

 

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  • movedon
    July 24, 2008

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    I loved the title
    Warrior Eagle said it all! Perhaps the repetition wasn't best, but I dont think it drew anything away from the poem. It's still lovely!

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • warrior-eagle
    July 5, 2008

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    I like this.
    I just thought repeating the word
    took away some power from the poem.
    I did enjoy the fact that it painted a picture
    in my mind, I liked that.GOod work.
    Thanks for getting it done on time.

    ...Simply Me♥


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    July 5, 2008

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    wow you did awesome with your word darl..some tough competition in this one..I like yours more then my effort lol

    Hope you do well


    Cind

  • warrior-eagle
    June 20, 2008
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    Peculiar