You should see me right now,
even though I send cheerful pictures of me,
I am depressed.
I have black rings around my eyes because I can't sleep.
My hair is mattered and wavey because I have no need to get out of bed and brush it.
My skin is baggy and the color of a pale moon because I haven't bathed.
My heart and breath are barely goin because I feel so dead.
I feel like I am in an everlasting coma.
My mum wants me to go to the doctor's office and see what the problem is,
but I already know.
It's something called heartbreak.
Please tell me what you think
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wow.. this sounds like something i would write.. i can tell youre going through pain, emotional to the point of completely breaking.. it may not be your best work, but you have something to say, and words, wether in rhyme or not, makes an impact. im sorry you feel this way, but this pain could spawn into something much greater.. let this be your inspiration to write something beautiful.
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