Oh Pattyann I yearn for thee
but my patience’s wearing thin
I’d write my love with poetry
but I’m not allowed a pen
I’d scale the highest mountains
I’d swim the deepest seas
I’d hold you close right next to me
if this jacket had no sleeves
Oh Pattyann how of’t I cried
wishing you were here
If time allows we’ll meet again
in ten to twenty years
I’d love to tell you I’ll be fine
but that’s open to debate
Some learn-ed men too quick agree
with edicts of the state
Oh Pattyann I do declare
my love for you consumes
My hopes, my heart, my crayon dreams
within this rubber room
Author notes
This is pure fantasy and an 'inside' joke I share with pattyann4500
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Yiou wish up on you private joke the way it sounds. Well you don't need to wish no more now the love of your life is here.
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Funny funny funny!
If you only knew how funny this is to me. I spent some time in a mental ward and oh the stories I could tell. I really appreciate the humor of this excellently written poem!
Regards
Jennifer
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Quite amusing and clever wording, there Leo. Thanks for sharing.
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Welcome ...
to the monkey house? A good tongue-in-cheek poem that reads with a goodly cadence that I could almost hear this one being sung! Sort-of-like "They're coming to take me away ... Hee, hee, ... to the funny farm, where life can be beautiful all the time, and my last line ... "except it's never warm!" joy
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Oh leo, this has made me chuckle at the thought of you and rubber rooms and crayons lolol...too funny 
Love, Chez
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Oh, Noble Prince of mine,
I wondered why you tarry.
At least it's you this time,
for jail for me was scarry!
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Aww..... how sweet of you to remember...lol.
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Sounds to me like you are both nuts !! I like the background and border you chose to go with the Crayon Dream. Well done.
Cheryl
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Yeah!! Kinda rough being a prisoner of love. Makes ya crazy doesn't it? Okay I have a question, if you scream Love at the rubber walls will it bounce back at you? This is just too funny...I'm sure Pattyann will be on the floor rolling when she reads this!!
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nice
i completely relate. is pattyann the love that you write about so often? i love the imagery and the way you describe the depth of your love. great write.
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