You lent me the sun
When I had known only of
The cold, unlit moon
Your arms have become my sky.
Love of mine, you watch over
Author notes
[I'd stare at the sun for you, allow myself to go blind, because your face is etched in my mind anyway]
5+7 I suppose...
Tanka form
I hate the ending so I'll keep playing with it for a while...
A contest entry
- Baby, you would say anything, let's keep to the scripted quotes shall we? by Kiss the girl--x.
525 points, ended July 1, 2008, 20 entries
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