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Many Rainbows

The journey can be long with many a mile

reaching the end of my rainbow was surely worthwhile

for the colours that greeted me came from your eyes

and I knew I had found my eternal, earthly prize.

 

To the end of life's road together we ride

seeking new rainbows with you by my side,

yet none will compare to the one where we met

for the end was the beginning of the best part of life yet.

 

Sweet surprises and troubles have we both found

knowledge of one another most deeply profound,

so many more rainbows there are to discover

for you are my best friend, partner and lover.

 

That rainbow so precious where I first found you

is the one where the next pages of my life started anew,

from sepia tones to bright colours I was moved

for the worth of our love I have finally proved.

 

 

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  • penman gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    excellent

    Wow, so well crafted and touching. Another incredible write from your wonderful quill. All the best in the contest.


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    June 20, 2008

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    This is brilliantly lovely! I really love this piece! It is as if you wrote it for my hubby and I personally. We felt exactly the same way. Wonderful write!