'Unburden me, oh lord’
I wish to withstand the worst, of needless
expectations; no more
I pray to feel the power,
of an unbreakable, boisterous personality.
Affirm my dreams,
faith will flower, as I hold on tight.
I will allow no distractions
forever praising you, Lord
and all that is pure in my life.
Author notes
written from the prompt word of Unstoppable - 10 lines
not sure if it's the brilliance you want for a pass into round three or not..I enjoyed writing it
A contest entry
- Round 2--Invite Only by warrior-eagle.
500 points, ended July 6, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this was an amazing piece of poetry. well deserved gold.
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Wow.
Definitely going to round three,
this was amazing.
This actually reminded me to keep going,
this was also really inspiriational.
Thanks for entering
And getting it done on time.
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wow I am touched this spoke to you so much..I hadnt written much of a spiritual , uplifting write for a wheil...felt like i wanted to and unstoppable became the perfect prompt word for it....I hope this lifts everyone up...like me ..thank you so much, a joy to be challenged
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it IS that amazing!
I am glad you wrote it with that word,
cause I wasn't expecting something spiritual at all!
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Wow sissy.. You did a really good job with that word
.. Very uplifting and spiritual. Best of luck!!! 
Angel
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beautifully spiritual piece. Best of luck sis!!
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Thanks Bro, It's been a while since i did spiritual
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Honey, your personality is already boisterous and unbreakable
You covered 'unstoppable' pretty well I think. I like the style you used.
Best of luck and hoping you go through to the next round.
Love
Mum 
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heheh Thanx Mum
U tooo
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Unstoppable.
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