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Cherish

It flashed before me
the colors of the wild -
Tranquil nights and days

filling the mind-scope ;
mellow, swayin, petals
brushing against, the cheek.
Jeweled by  sun and splendor -

cherished by life and its days.

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 3

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    Oooh. I would love just a splash of those wild colors to flash before me too.

    Nicely written, with a bit of softly 'swayin' thoughts to please. Well done. I enjoyed this very much. ~Pamela


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    June 25
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    66 words - plenty of time to hone down to 45 or less. I will be back.

  • CaliOkie silver member
    June 20
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    Ahhh, this is just beautiful. Nice response to the prompt. Paradise. Thank you.

    Garrison


  • Amera gold member
    June 20

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    I love this! Your vocabulary paints a vivid picture of motion and image with a sensitive tranquility.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Swangrnv
    June 20

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    you sure nailed

    the imagery in this piece! wow, felt like I outdoors enjoying this wonderful beauty you have so eloquently described! nice job poetess!


  • secberm
    June 20
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    Write on, beauty.

    Dez

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