I wanna fall in love again
Going back to the days
Where I didn’t want to go to sleep
Just because I’d miss you
Back to the days where
You made me smile and giggle
And I never got sick or tired
Of hearing your voice
I want that feeling back
In my stomach
The feeling of butterflies
Whenever we talked
No matter how hard I try
Or how many times I deny it
I miss what we had so much
And I miss the person you were even more so.
Author notes
A litte explanation to the loneliness part - everyone thinks "oh you're in a relationship, you couldn't be lonely" but when I wrote this my relationship was the exact reason I was lonely. He didn't have time for me and that made me feel sooooooo alone.
A contest entry
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Comments
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I really liked this piece, it's so sad and heartbreaking.
I can feel the emotions from this poem--longing for happier times, the loss of those memories, the pain those memories bring back.
Thank you so much for your entry
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I like this. I feel longing here. memories. Loss. Lots of different emotions here. Thanks for sharing this one with us and thanks for entering it into this contest.
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wow!
this was an amazing poem! the depth was incredible and the emotions were lovely! your words painted so many beautiful pictures in mind! it was a lovely poem with a melancholy touch! >.< oh well, it was great! keep penning kays! and your tittle... BRILLIANT!
I LOVE IT!
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