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Asylum

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Sounds of laughter and torment
words spoken
making little sense
where have they taken her

People wandering aimlessly
confusion in their eyes
were they put here legally
or is it all a lie


~vampy

Author notes

Pt. 3
Picture from Troy B. Thompson(Flickr)
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  • macandrew
    June 20, 2008

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    It might have been a lie at the beginning but most likely they fit in after a while. I am sure those places would drive you crazy.

    frightening
    John


  • owlishhunter
    June 20, 2008

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    Very good, my dear, very good indeed. I don't think I've read parts one and two yet though...guess I had better do just that