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rainy love

Our love,
made pure by
the rain.
Our fears
washed away
into the
water's perdition.

Author notes

First 15 word poem I have ever really done. I just thought of my first kiss in the rain.

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  • SongOfSilence
    June 21, 2008

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    whoa!

    you're wicked talented! ^-^ i love this write.. its beautiful. you've given such a beautiful picture in just a few words! great job! =D


    -Rayne


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 20, 2008
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    sincerely engaging... x