standing in a line
waitng for punishment from those thought divine
scores fall
hoping to answer the ethereal beauty's call
eternal life
without a single strife
but is a soul a worthy price?
to throw another's soul to the luck of the dice?
as the heart slows
and the wind begins to blow
hear her cackle
as her minions do descend with shackles
for you see
you shall pay for your greed
you gambled one,gave her two
such foolishness you would deal she new
now she shall turn your soul to the life giving brew.
A contest entry
- Write me a poem... about anything you want! by RainbowGirl257.
500 points, ended July 22, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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This is good, but I really don't know what to think about it.... what are you getting at here? The flow is great, I just wish I could understand what it is you are trying to say..... If this is something personal, I hope you can get through it, and if it is strictly for the artistic value, it is awesome.
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