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Cuckoo





Droplets of showers
harmonious cuckoo singing

beckoning moisture
burning longings

touching chimes
within jingled dreams.

Author notes

~spiritualangel~

Prompt ~ Some people walk in the rain, others just get wet. ~Roger Miller

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  • jackreed3 gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    I like this poem.. it has great charicter in it..
    Your foum is right on key... you have great talent..


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 20, 2008
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    deeply creative... x