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Thicker than Water?

Cast out;
Am I,

Broken;
Are my dreams,

Destroyed;
Is my future,

Dead;
Is love...

A contest entry

You may notice that I don't really like water, I have a fear of deep water, I'm Hydrophobic, great eh? LOL

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 20, 2008
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    truly expressive... x


  • Cannonsfire
    June 20, 2008

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    Don't go anywhere near the Irish Sea then LOL...but in all seriousness and I know this doesn't speak of you..you still brought real feelings to this write. Good job. Slan, Cheryl


    • Domz101
      June 20, 2008
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      LOL

      Ha Ha yeah, I won't - at least not in the near future or future after that! but thanks Chez, Much Love - Domz

  • U.g.l.y.
    June 20, 2008

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    And for someone who fears water, this one is nice, yet you look like you forgot the other part of the quote, yet it outstands. Good luck in the contest, I hope my AP mom judges you fairly.

    • Domz101
      June 20, 2008
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      Any chance of a kind word in her ear? only jokin' !!!

      ha ha, thanks Kyo-N, cheers for the kind words..Domz

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