She called it
a celebration
of pain,
bathing herself
in yesterday's
forgotten hopes
and dreams.
Author notes
Some people walk in the rain, others just get wet. ~Roger Miller
A contest entry
- ~Monsoon~ by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 20, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is just so stunning, and so right on the truth. It's short but it says very much.
Thanks for your entry!
Kari
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wow yes how true we can sometimes get lost in our pain from our past but the past does not eqaul the future it makes us who we are your words are full of emotions chasing in and out of each line wonderful powerful poem congratulations on your shiny good luck in the contest
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This is just perfect. Just wow.
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Very thought rooking piece. Congratulations on gold
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Duh winner
and still champion by first round TKO, Mysticstorm. You have the ability to go deep with so few words. Well done, mystic
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Congratulations on the Gold love!
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Truly meaningful and sincerely engaging... x
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You amazing mind has captured this once more superbly. Beautifully written dance in the wash of Gods tears. Taking the journey back into those most treasured dreams. Best to you.
Love,
Mouser
Sun and stars shine no brighter than you!
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How do you come up with these for the prompts!!?? I get nothing! This is sad, yet graceful.. and again so amazing!! I just love your style..
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