Narrow minds as sugar, dissovle when flooded
but hope rises cranberried to feed the many
Author notes
Prompt ~ Some people walk in the rain, others just get wet. ~Roger Miller
In a list
A contest entry
- ~Monsoon~ by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 20, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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aww,w lovely, i really liek this, its a beautiful metaphor. congrats on the bronze
take care
stephanie

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I like to think I definitely do not have a narrow mind.. so I really like the imagery you used for this!! Congrats again!


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Great metaphor and sincerely meaningful... x



