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Right Now Who Am I? ((Neo Soul Poetry ))

Right Now Who Am I? ((Neo Soul Poetry ))

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

 

Right now,

My own thoughts

Sounds annoying to me.

 

And right now, I don’t know

What is happening to me.

 

It’s like my words are taking

A absence and napping

On my blues.

 

And the time is passing me by

So vastly so I

Constantly press the alarm snooze.

 

If I just only knew what was

On my words mind

I wouldn’t have to work

My mind from nine to five

To diagnose what’s

A typo sign to emotions,

And when I don’t have

What it takes to be focused

Would the media air waves

Treat me like I don’t exist

So nonchalant fraud and bogus?

 

Mostly I,

Have spiritually died

And gave nine lives

To keep you awake and alive.

But right now my sentences

Is starting to loose its damn mind

Because I am inquiring ,

 

Who am I ?

 

 

Julia Clark - Herring

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

Author notes

Right Now Who Am I? ((Neo Soul Poetry ))
Right now I don’t know who I am
Mentally I just don’t feel well

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  • penman gold member
    June 27
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    wonderful

    Very touching and so well done. Thank you for sharing.


  • rainbow bi trinity
    June 21

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    i like this a whole lot is funky hip like you are you but some great twist on this here and luv u stay sweet juju


  • D Saul So Sexy silver member
    June 20

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    this piece is twisted like my babe man i know its a lot being these people that you are but in each one of those people i have meet holds some thing quie intresting charming and special i love you and even when your brain freeze up you stil write well


  • secberm
    June 20

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    "Look! Up in the sky... It's a bird. It's a plane. It's Ju-ju on the verge of losing her brain." LOL I cain't think straight! There's a lot on my mind and I ain't thinkng of nothing at all. Jeez... Where did this come from...? This idea of taking this white orb from this chicken's butt and scrabble it for a fast break...? Is this food for thoughts? Jeez... Somebody help me!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 20

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    who am I?..

    you ask the question many (including myself) have asked

    you are in a 'funk' but hopefully you'll shake it off soon and return to your 'normal' wildchild self!
    just hang in there lady!


  • Ephiphany gold member
    June 20

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    Sometimes Love

    our spirits are broken by what goes on around us. Even then we have to stand still and put all of our Trust in the Almighty. I too am going thru, and you are right sometimes, you really don't know what to think or where to start when things are all in a cloud at the moment.

    It is well, take care and I love you
    This was Real and heartfelt.

    -BossLady


  • Levesta gold member
    June 20
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    THIS WAS DEEP SIS I KNOW HOW THIS FEEL WHEN ITS TO MUCH GOING ON AT ONE TIME

  • Ms Sexy silver member
    June 20
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    ohh this was a deep write ma. I liked the way you choose your words to express you thoughts.

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