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Phantom Me

The alarm blares somewhere in the distance, and I'm drawn back to reality
With open eyes and an empty heart I wrestle with my pillows, and fall to my feet
I'm a zombie with my routine, and as always a single tear caresses my cheek
It is the only love I get, cold as it rends through the tissues on my face

Driving is heart pounding, for I never know how I make it
My mind fails me in this time, as it falters with the memory
Work is a fantasy, I'm someone they want me to be
Yet the reality scares even myself away from me

My eyes are tired, heavy with dispare, though I sleep
The sleep is endless and futile, barely there, invisable to me
I worry that some one may see this identity I pretend to be
It is a factitious pleague, a phantom genuinely

But there are no dreams for the broken soul, that never sleeps
The dreams that haunt my existance, breaking veracity
My blood are late, until heaven we meet
For there are no dreams to comfort me

So I walk this world, until death finds me
The broken soul, a Phantom with no dreams

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  • HpWICKEDangel
    August 17, 2008

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    i feel the need to dream as well... where dreams elude even the hint of mine own.
    the flow and words were great. i love how you just ran with it all. i seem to connect to this piece, for many of us feel the same way. dream and sleep alike never come to a working soul, and we are all guilty of never indulging to let them come in. great pice and thanks for sharing.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 16, 2008

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    Ah..this is the story of the heart and you narrated it with its depth as well..wonderful words with its description my friend..well done..


  • brokenxxangel
    July 3, 2008

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    I think that it has great imagery and I really like the quote too; but this is much deeper than the quote and really brings it to life.
    ~airy~


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    Thank you for thinking my quote is amazing,
    glad you really liked it.
    You have done well writing it into your poem.
    good luck.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce