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Falling

I was in love
Holding your hand tight
Why didn't I notice us falling apart,
The ground under me, crumpling?

Finally you left.
The ground gave way.
Making me fall,
Lifting you out of my reach.
I tried and tried to reach you
But you didn't notice,
Because you were busey with her.

DID YOU LIKEY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

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