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So just finish me

You said that I am a puzzle
yet you will not solve me.
What are you to prove,
keeping me lying on that table.
Aren't you going to finish me?
Then I will be complete.
You said that I am a puzzle,
so just come finish me.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 27, 2008
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    This is interesting

    Penned very well for the prompt


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 20, 2008

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    Just beautiful..the last line is the crux of the thought...I love this piece..thank you so much for your wonderful entryin my contest..