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when it all comes
falling down
with out a sound
will you move in time
and when it all comes
crashing down
will you notice pieces of your life all around
when you are lying face down?

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  • SpiritDarkmaiden
    June 20, 2008

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    O.o Wow I like the rhyme and the way it flows. The last two lines really pull this piece together for me, "Will you notice pieces of your life all around"
    "When you are lying face down?"

    Great write