Music piercing as I walk,
underneath the scrumptious russet moon.
While wonderfully savoring her opulence.
Author notes
Prompt:
Sepia-toned moon
15 Words
A contest entry
- Late Night Quickie 10-15-20 by Cerulean Sunrise.
475 points, ended June 20, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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This is beautifully written if you ask me. Almost ounds like a romantic poem. I really enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Wow this is very good. very well written i like it alot. Thanks for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck.
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Shelly
For You
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my my, missy. i dont know what the last word means, but i bet its' amazing!!! haha weeeell...hmmm...i have the feeling this poem is aimed to be joyous, but if the music is piercing then i dont see it as too happy. but i might be getting the total wrong message of the poem bc i dont know that one word XD lol what does it mean?? NEwho, a mysterious write...i love it!
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If I remember correctly...since I've slept since writing this...it's another word for beauty or magnificance....
It's suppose to be a non-dark poem...but I'm glad you enjoyed it! -
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thank you!! i'll be sure to try and use that word in my poetry =]
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Your welcome! You should it's an excellent word!
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lovely write indeed with the beautiful iimage you have created here
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Congrats on the HM
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Just lovely.
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Graceful, like the moon its self. Such a serene take on the beauty of the sepia moon. Love the word choice and flow. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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Haha this is cute for some odd reason lol. I really like it though. It kind of remindes me of myself, walking in the moonlight blasting music. Good luck!!!
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I just love the word opulence!! Beautiful take on the prompt!!
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Ohhhh.....Two gorgeous words...."russet" and "opulence" and you used them well!! Wonderful job here and best of luck....
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