Orbs iridescence paled
in reverence to
transcending tranquillity
Our languid entwining
surpassing sensual
celestial shining
Author notes
Prompt: Sepia-toned Moon, 15 words
In a list
A contest entry
- Late Night Quickie 10-15-20 by Cerulean.
475 points, ended June 20, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent write, sister. Love the imagery. Oddly enough, it reminds me of moments of lighter days as a child in New Orleans. Jeez...
Thanks for sharing. Write on.
Dez
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Fantastic write. I love the imagery and your words. You have painted a pretty scene. Congrats on the silver auntie J!♥
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great write....loving the alliteration ...congrats on your silver ..
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This oozes sensuality... no matter what the color!!! Very nice short piece... Congrats. on the Silver too!!!
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woman and babe wowza blew my socks right of me feet you did
wiv dis amazin sexy poem that sends me shocked and waved lol
abe
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woman and babe wowza blew my socks right of me feet you did wiv dis amazin sexy poem that sends me shocked and waved lol abe *clappy* *clappy* *clappy*
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wow.. this was really sensual!!I really liked what you saw in the picture sissy.. I wouldhave written some stupid..Lol.. But you did wonderful!!! Congrats on the Silver!!!
Angel
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Very sensual and romantic.
Good Job
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Congrats on the silver. Seriously I love your mind. You have one of the most beautiful and imaginative poetry. You're so brilliant... coming up with these gorgeous ideas and expressing them in ways no one else could. I love it. Never lose that.
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yummy....lol....I thought by the style of the write that I would guess the judge and I was right...I try that now and again with those that are smart enough to be able to write for the judges eye...I was so so so spot on here...lol
Well done on the Shiny silver thingy
Simon
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Congrats on the silver!
Wow
sweet drops of love! Gorgeous write hunni, glad it has a trophy next to it 
Superbly penned
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Wonderful word selection in this! It just rolls off the tongue! A worthy and deserving trophy winner!
Congratulations!
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Another masterpiece by the master of sensual poetry!
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Congratulations, love, on the silver trophy! I so admire any poet who can write a verse, with metaphoric meaning in only 15 words. Your subtle sensuality, is peaceful and shows so much love.
Linda
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Your way with words will always amaze and intrance me. Your talent can not be replaced. This is beauty beyond words. Congratulations on the trophy!
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incredible!
this was very very good! i'm at a lost for words..
oh, congrats on the silver!
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a continued amizing display of your talent to grasp the depth of a scene
Joe
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This is so sensual and vivid. Your imagery always leaves me a bit speechless. The flow of this piece went well over the line of perfection into something I can't even describe. each word just rolled of the tongue. Amazing sis!!!
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fantastic imagery....well done...congratulation on the silver...
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Oh what a beautiful, sensual piece which fits the picture wonderfully
Congratulations on your well deserved silver
Gaylene
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congrats on silver auntie
i love you -
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How do you manage to incorporate such great vocabulary? e.g. iridescence, transcending (always sounds so deep), tranquility, languid (love this word), celestial...basically, every word you used was fantastic.
Great write and good luck
The picture is pretty...
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Very beautiful.
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Oooo! You go girl! A wonderful take on the prompt indeed! Excellent imagery and depth woven within. Brava my dear!
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Sigh... It just comes so easy doesnt it.
LOL
This is sensational. I am jealous
Delila
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Oh My! I am going to mess around and .. well.. I am not telling!
this is a very intense and explosive take on the prompt. Beautifully beautifully penned . Best wishes in the comp
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How come I am the only one that saw sex in that prompt?? I saw a gorgeous male ass in the wonderful tones of sepia and everyone else saw a real moon!!! LOL...I thought I was joining the club not holding the only chair This was truly stunning and I love your poetic beauty!! Best wishes
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thiis is a beautiful image you have sensually entwined with your words and love should be could be... *sigh* nicely written once again
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Holy shit!
You are on a role tonight!
Good luck in the contest, although I'm sure you'll place... -
Outstanding!
Such an explosion of thought in just a few words! Excellent choice of wording! The spark that lights the fire! Loved it! Don
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go sis go! you're rockin' tonight
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