I try to hide it
try to denie it
i smile on the outside
but inside i feel it burning
growing with each glimpse
pulsing with each kiss
Iv'e tried to stop it
tried to turn back
but its not even worth it
because im still falling
time is up now
theres no receeding
no changing what im feeling
all thats left is falling
i wait for the pain
i know it will be there
familliar and clear
the one who i want
i know i'll never have
the perfect love story
crashed to an end
A contest entry
- Give me any kind of love you want by ApocalypseAngel.
450 points, ended June 27, 2008, 50 entries
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Comments
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oh very well penned! i enjoyed every line. thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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This was very good. IT had nice flow and meaning. Thanks for the entry!
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wow sad!
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