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Bitter Sweet Dreamer

Have I reached that point.
That point of breaking..
Can I give into my evil thoughts
and twisted desires?
Sometimes these thoughts scare me.
Yet they comfort all the same.

I'm so easily poked and prodded
It's so provoking..
So many appealing notions..hmmm.
only time will see.
I lead myself into the path of destruction.
..that point is getting so blurry.
I've very slowly started to burn away.
I've always played the pushover..
What will she do next?
EVERYTHING!

A person can only be pushed so far
Till they break.

Author notes

It's the rythem of two hearts beating pounding out a message steady and true talk to me baby tell me what you're feeling I know what love is what's it to you

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  • Sound of Madness
    June 20, 2008

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    This is really good. I can relate to the start of this. I can have some really twisted thoughts sometimes, but it does seem to make me feel better. Well, good luck in the contest.


  • Nikki Rowles
    June 20, 2008
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    I like it I can kinda relate to it...so you have a good chance....Thank you for entering
    Dhrace

  • angryelf6886
    June 20, 2008

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    i love you girl....how about we break together. world domination is sure to be a success if we both break =]