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The Believer and the Deciever

I knew of your past,
but you promised not to hurt me,
for if i were hurt,
you too would be hurt by the pain you caused.
I believed the silly words,
and let you take advantage.
All was going good-
until half way there you decided to break my heart.
"Why?" i cry to him.
"Why would you hurt me?"
He shrugs and simply answers,
"It's a habit i cannot grow out of."

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  • Excellent

    This is a very good poem. I assume it is personal to you, I know how you feel. Love does suck lol, I will agree with you there, but there are still the good times which can never be forgotten. Thanks for the comment. I felt this poem, it was very good =]