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Whats trapped inside her

her fire
her desire
burning inside her
scorching
tearing
hurting
his love the only thing to stop her
the only thing to save her
her only way of redemption
her only real way of living
her love pure and true
these feelings worth more than anything shes ever had
any possession ever owned
her very life lies in his hands
his very essence reviving
all she wants is his love
to be hers forever and true
shes made her decision
theres no turning back
she knows what she wants
shes ready to fight
to hurt
to feel
for his love
she would do anything
all for his love

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  • GypsyEyes
    July 3, 2008

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    truly like this poem! you have written something great! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox