I guess I should start with,
I never really opened my heart,
I never thought I would fall in love,
With a stranger,
It feels so right to be with him,
I never knew it could happen,
Till it happened to me,
The love for him,
Is as strong as a heart beat,
Looking in his eyes,
My pulse races time,
But I guess you never know what you got,
Till it's gone,
Things change,
Even if you don't want them too,
All it took was one look,
To a dream come true,
You never know what you want to see,
Till it's right in front of you,
So let it play,
Hold up,
Somethings happening,
Cause everyone's around,
But he's the only one I see,
I see hunger in his eyes,
Does he see my fear? ,
I can't take my eyes away from him,
From the start,
I knew,
He knew,
That he was always beside me,
Even when I was alone,
With no one to hold,
Even when I was cold,
He knew,
We knew,
That I loved him...
Author notes
This poem was inspired by my bff Chelsea and her best guy friend Jacob. And this poem reminds me of the book Twilight, when she met Jacob black. The weired thing is that Jacob black is the same name as Chelsea's guy Friend Jacob. Same last name!!!! I know you probably don't believe me but it's true. Plus if you don't then oh well. Then I guess you don't believe me.
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Bella's point of view
Option #2
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Comments
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wow very awesome that your friends friend has the same name!
this is a very good piece, i think you did really well at describing their relationship! good write, thanks heaps for sharing
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Very well penned;
It is as though I was reading the books again, very cool.
& how odd your friends male friend has the same name! I bet that spun you out the first time you read Twilight
Great write
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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ok i already commented on this, but you need to add your username, option number, point of view, and "Team". i will add you to the finalist when you have those few things. [[you will need the defiatly by aug 1 because thats when the contest it closing. august 1 morning!]]
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this is an amzing poem!!!!.....and that is SOOOOO cool about the whole jacob black thing.....
keep writing
keep smiling
keep the peace
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I can see the similarites in this write. I think that you have described Jacob and Bella's feelings for eacother nicely. Thanks for sharing.
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OMG!!! IT IS JUST LIKE TWILIGHT!!! that's so awsome...and kinda creepy...anout jacob black. butanyway, i loved the poem! and if i werent saving up to do a contest, i would give you 3 little clappies!
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rite when i read the first few lines, i immediately thought of Twilight !!! xD great job !
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