How strange...
the buzz in my head
has me seeing red
swirling alive
in a beaker of dread.
Siphon the dregs off
strain through the cheesecloth
run it again
with a dash of cayenne
while I writhe in the ecstasy of pain.
Author notes
30-60 words on the picture prompt: Toxic by =anaRasha (deviant art)
A contest entry
- Now for a dark QUICKIE!!!! by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended June 20, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very dramatic poem. I woulda thought something about hairspray or gel, but the blood is a good lead in too. well done and congrats on the green nugey.
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since a bag of blood and a beaker were present I just went with it, lol thanks
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Beautifully penned. The flow and imagery are quite intriguing. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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Ohhhh creepy but oh so cool!!!
Excellent take!
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oddly beautiful in macabre ways.
Truly enjoyed it.
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Very unique and interesting thoughts behind this. well done and best of luck!
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OOOh very different, such an intriguing take on the given prompt. Thank you for your entry!
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Good luck to you.
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