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NeverLand bby.

I'll be peter,
and you can be wendy.
Lets never look back,
as we leave this city.

they'll call our names,
but we wont go.
lets get ou of this game,
we're done with his show.

we will go away where no one can see,
dont worry babe it will be just you and me,
people may wounder where we are
but they wont know cause we will be so far

not done.

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  • alesana
    July 5, 2008

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    good

    are you a musician or really like music because of the poems of yours ive read they all sing to me. good i like it


    • no-way-ap
      July 5, 2008
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      yeah.

      i really do like music and never thought of my poems as song lyrics. this opens up so much more i can do withmy writing. thanks loads.