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Puppets (Sonnetlike)

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She watches from on high, the puppets below,
dancing to the marionette's sad tune.
The winds of change are coming too soon,
as it was written so many years ago.

Such a sad life the puppets live every day,
always at their master's beck and call.
Millions upon millions are in thrall,
such an evil, heart saddening ballet.

Waves wash the sand out from under limp feet,
fall down, brush off, start over again.
To break free they have to praise God, Amen,
living for the Lord, what a spiritual treat.

She knows God, she came to him very young,
also knows the devil and his lying tongue.

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  • cool write!!!!!
    loved it! thoroughly unique take on the prompt!!!
    i Loved; "The winds of change are coming too soon,">> a powerful and sad line
    best of luck in the contest!

  • Very well done. I enjoyed this alot. Thank you for your wonderful entry.

  • Okay now this piece kicks some as*.
    I loved this. Deep and full of great imagery. Had me on edge then drawn in. This is very uplifting, no matter how often we feel like puppets theres always one higher pulling the strings LOL ( hey i can read into it anything I want to.)
    I think this one is your best yet.

    Good luck in the contest

    Love you
    tory