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Without You

In the dead of night
Do you think about me
Do I cross your mind
In the middle of the day

Am I just a memory
Best forgotten
Did your love simply
Fade away

    My way is lost
    Without you
    Pain my cost
    Without you
    Travel the abyss
    Without you
    Hate my life
    Without you

The sun may shine
The moon still glows
Still each empty day
I pray for the gallows

Only now do I realize
My treasure lost
Pissed away for what
My selfish desire

With you gone
Knowing I'm foresaken
Wait to be taken
Live upon my funeral pyre
   
      Without you
      My way is lost
      Without you
      Pain my cost
      Without you
      Travel the abyss
      Without you
      Hate my life

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