Whitewashed dilemma
dressed in shades of gray
so faint, so light
they seem to be washing away.
The moon is not setting-
the sun shan't shine,
instead.. it stalls.. waiting.
Author notes
The picture is the prompt =>
http://evamcdermott.deviantart.com/art/On-the-Beach-69191730
A contest entry
- Time to PIF Picture Prompt #10 => Quick-ish by marlene47.
725 points, ended June 21, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice take you have in the final stanza that stalled moment, the waiting.
Interesting expression, whitewashed dilemma, a made acceptable one? fading away.
Thank you for your entry posing two choices.
Marlene
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