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Lie In It



Yes, it is your bed
and you pretend that you will lie in it.

[lie in it
          without me]


Love,
I told you once I don't care for it.
I could feel for you with the strength
of a thousand oceans,
but I'll remind you what I said -

I'll walk away just as the same
as if I'd met you a minute ago...


                                    without a single tear in my eye



And I feel I'm getting ready to do it.

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  • Dean
    July 17

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    Now this is the BlackWidow smart-severity I remember. Out of your pain, you build weapons with your poetry. Everything was spot on. I could feel it coming with 'let me remind you...'.