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Forever, he said. Never. She cried.

Hopelessly he waits
forlornly at her door,
whispering sweet regrets
of naivety and innocence.

Bitterly she snarls,
withered away by hatred
of kisses of death,
of blindness, arrogance.

For hours they argue-
of debt and of price
Never sleeping, never resting-
held together by threads of resistance.

Together forever
they'll stand alone.
There are no dreams for
a broken soul that never sleeps.

No dreams of love,
of lust even.
Just nights without rest
and days without hope.

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  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    July 1, 2008
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    " Together forever
    they'll stand alone.
    There are no dreams for
    a broken soul that never sleeps. "

    I love those lines, very good writing.
    and the ending was really nice.
    Very enjoyable.
    Thanks for entering my contest.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce