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Is It Over Yet?

As of this morning today,

I am no longer for sale.

I was imformed that I,

was bought by a human male.

 

Will he free me from this life, 

of poverty and starvation?

I don't know, but I hope that,

I will have found my salvation. 

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For sale reminded me of slave trading and etc. so I wrote a poem about it (kind of).

So how was it?

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  • funckymonkey
    June 20, 2008
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    oooh! good poem!!
    i really really like the first verse!!