"Oh boy! Look there!"
I hear her shout
with excitement.
She's found it,
what she had lost
her little friend's head.
Such a beautiful little girl;
everyone always compliments.
If only you knew her story;
her mother always says.
A chuckle they give
with a pat on her shoulder;
her smiling her widest.
Those pretty bright eyes
innocent smile.
Hitting her friend;
then mutualting his head.
His body lay there limp,
decapitated soul.
Such a beautiful little girl;
with such a horrible little soul.
A contest entry
- Dolls and blood and broken dreams by MissStranger.
450 points, ended June 22, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow!this was amazing!simple word-combinations yet such a powerful manner of taking in the picture!well done indeed!thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!
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WoW! I loved this ^^ "Such a beautiful little girl; with such a horrible little soul." I love those lines. Great write.
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