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Serrating Sound

Proud, the harmony in my head
As I lie tired
Tired of life and love
But I can't sleep
But for my broken heart, my broken soul.

A sweet dream that I would have
Would be incredible so
But
There are no dreams for
A broken soul
That never sleeps.

Grinding into my mind is the heartache
Like a ghastly memory does it linger
Such a soundly nuisance.

For I cannot escape the graceful sound
Of a ready lover and friend
Like nails on a chalkboard
This is where I take my leave.

Winding around my finger
So I never forget
But
There are no dreams for
A broken soul
That never sleeps.

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  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    Thank you so much for entering my contest.
    I think you have done a great job using my quote.
    Your piece came together really good.

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce