You tried to brake me
You used me and the love I had for you
To get your own sweet revenge on my heart
But you didn't know I'd get through
What did you expect?
For me to lay in the darkness crying
For me to give up on my dreams
To watch myself slowly dieing?
Well then you where wrong
You even though only 5 days have gone by
Since you ripped out my heart
I've been the strongest I've been in a long time.
You see now I don't have you holding me back
I'm free to fulfil my dreams
I'm making the best of my life
And I've realised your not what I need
So I guess your plan failed
And I would just like to say thank you
Because you've shown me how strong I am
And that no matter what I'll make it through!
A contest entry
- Even when your hope is gone, move along by Barely Breathing.
450 points, ended June 21, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Something Sad by LittleDecoy.
900 points, ended August 31, 2008, 85 entries
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Comments
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good poem. great emotion.
i love the positive outlook on it.
thanks for entering & good luck!! -
This is such a wonderful poem about heartache, but getting up and getting on with it anyway. Well done and thanks for entering.
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