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Drift Away


Life can flow like water
in leaks a seeps it creeps,
there are no dreams
for a broken soul, that never sleeps

Blink of an eye
wake up little dreamer,
drift away into the night
wake up little screamer

Drifting into fantasy
lost in this plain,
living in this world of thoughts
that seem so insane

Baby close your eyes
drift away so silently,
forget all about today
slip away so perfectly


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There are no dreams, for a broken soul, that does not sleep

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  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    First thank you so much for entering my contest.
    I love the way you opened this piece.
    My quote fit well into your poem.
    Great job and good luck.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • penman gold member
    June 23, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very well done. So perfect for the theme. Best of luck in the contest.


  • raggyann
    June 21, 2008
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    you said it all in your author notes
    oh so true